Which sentence should Gordon revise to make it more precise, and why?
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who is gorden mate ur question is incomplete
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The first sentence should be revised to make it more precise as that would provide provide more information on what did Gordon exactly see that got him "struck" when he entered the room. This sentence could have been written in a more descriptive manner so that it could have contained descriptions of the exact state of the room. That description could have helped readers identify the condition of the room more vividly.
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