Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should revise the paraphrase?
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Henry should add some descriptive sentences to make the story compelling. It is about writing a narrative to overcome a challenge. It is a story in which some soldiers have been shown to be marching for days so that they could see the dragon. On reaching the dragon's lair, they heard the huge roar of the dragon but they stayed calm and composed. They did not get perplexed and disturbed by it over there.
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