Question

Which underlined segment is most
important to revise for grammar, style
or clarity?
Here
If we have to replace Amar, we will want someone
A
B
C
who is intelligent, friendly, a hard worker and reliable.
D
F​

Answer 1

Answer:

Explanation:

D

Answer 2

The grammatically correct sentence will be:

If we have to replace Amar, we will want someone who is intelligent, friendly, hardworking, and reliable.

How can a sentence be revised for grammar, style, or clarity?

• To make a sentence grammatically correct, we can use the following tips:

1. Proper punctuation marks. (Beginning a sentence with a capital letter, full stop at the end of a sentence, etc.)
2. Ensure subject-verb agreement.
3. Do not make sentences wordy.
4. Use the correct tense throughout the sentence.

• The given statement - 'If we have to replace Amar, we will want someone intelligent, friendly, a hard worker, and reliable.'- is grammatically correct as is, but it can be made better.
• By replacing 'a hard worker' with 'hardworking', the continuity of the sentence remains intact.

Hence, the correct statement is: If we have to replace Amar, we will want someone who is intelligent, friendly, hardworking, and reliable.