English, asked by rishilaugh, 1 year ago

Write a story which may have some suspense elements and may also send some message!

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Answered by HappiestWriter012
11
Thanks for the questions sir.

⭐ ⭐ ♦A Learning walk ♦ ⭐ ⭐


On a fine day, Adya and Ishitha were walking on the road on their way to school. As they were approaching a corner of the street ;Their friends praneeth and siddharth joined them. The walk was usual. They started conversing to each other about what will be their day at school. When they neared a tree which is beside the park, they saw a women crying. They enquired the reason. They got to know about her pitable plight. She told that her kid was missing and she was worried if she was very hungry. Without telling a word, the group stepped forward. All the faces has gone back. They were doubtful to go forward or backward. Suddenly, they started to run in the other direction which won't lead to school. They neared the shop nearby. The shop had great traffic. It was a rich & good one among the ones there. Beside the shop, there were bunch of trees along with a vacant space . All this environment would be more colourful than that can be imagined. The shop keeper was Smriti. Though a bit serious about discipline, she is known for humanity. She used to give free food for poor.

Coming back to the story ; The group were running towards the shop. The shopkeeper greeted them. But they didn't seem to have observed him. They went deep into the open space. The scene that they viewed had melt their hearts and they started to cry the tears of grief. Everyone returned back on the road with totally frowned face. What had happened? What did they see in the vacant space. What they viewed was a girl dead.

What actually happened? Yesterday, The group of Ishitha, Praneeth, Adya, Siddharth were playing in the vacant space. They saw a girl, they didn't take much notice at her. What they don't know is the girl was hungry from 10 days. They realized that things which go unnoticed do also have a good importance. Then the old women was told about the girl lying dead. The women cried a lot. Many tried to console her.

The group have just couldn't imagine that their negligence could take a life.


⭐This is a learning lesson not only for them but also for all of us. When you see such first give them Snacks whatever you have,then inform to Police ⭐

#Togetherwegofar

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Answered by MilordoZ
9
Hey,

Your answer,

It might not send any kind of moral message but you may find it interesting :)!

>> WINTER THRILLS - MilordoZ

› A February morning was passing by as usual. There was snowfall and winds appeared such that they were playing with those pretty little balls of snow. Fields were all white, dressed with a snowy gown. I'm sure they'll be changing it to a green one. Trees all dried up with frost clinging to their lifeless branches. Quiet, peaceful and I was alone in this small little village of Ireland. People were all in their homes just as I am, might be taking sips of hot tea, milk or coffee. Who knows!

› The time was passing like a swift stream until a knock on my door obstructed it. I woke up, not really hastily and walked to my door while rubbing those frozen, pale hands in order to resurrect them for opening the door. By the time I was there, I opened that door and was welcomed by a few snowfalls, chilled wind and a man. He seemed somewhat Mexican, might be a traveller. He wasn't covered in snow except his eyes were something shiny in a strange way. I was wondering and was confused that how is he not dipped in snow inspite of this heavy fall of cotton balls!

› I brought him inside without wasting much time and understanding what he wants to say before he actually does that. As soon as he got inside he was welcomed by my collection of large stones! Well, Ireland is full of large stones, but some may appear unusual. They're termed as fairy stones that bring good luck. But they may turn your life into a nutshell. Yes, they are said to bring bad luck too if moved or stolen. And I brought a whole lot bunch of them into my house.

› After staring a them for a while, he was distracted as I asked him for some hot broth which was followed by a nice yes. I did it really fast and invited him to the fireplace. We chatted about our family, ourselves and other things. But we were disturbed by a knock on the door, again. I asked him to wait for a while which was agreed too with a short smile.

› Opening the door got me nothing and I forgot it as soon as it happened. Might be children or hailstones. And I steadily stepped towards the fireplace for continuing our chats. But.. Wait a second. Where'd he go? I mean he was just here! Sitting and drinking his soup. No signs of him anywhere to be found right now, appearing like he had vanished in no time. It might be a strange thing but something more strange was that on the chair where that person sat was now substituted by a fairy stone.

>> Hope it helps!

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