Write an Essay on the topic "Computer games. A benefit or waste of time?" in 300+ words .
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Playing computer video game is waste of time .Children should not be allowed to play them
As everyone{two words here} of us loves to live in {"a" or "this"} high tech world, why children should be legging in it? {"legging in it" is wrong - what do you mean?} It's{avoid contractions} true, but as an adult we know the limitations of the use of the technical devices such as cell phones, computers and so on, [while] children are unaware of it. Therefore, in my opinion, I agree that the playing computer games is [a ]waste of time with several explanation[s ] as mentioned below.{I would leave out this last phrase}
To begin with, children's study get[s ]{"is" seems better here} affected by constantly playing games on computers. Children will play it[them] continuously as they love to play it[them].{maybe use a synonym for the second "them", like "love to play these addictive apps} Obviously, computer games attrac[t ] us also; but for kids, they are not mature enough to understand that their time is being wasted. They cannot focus on their study properly and ultimately their grades get affected. Even if they do their home work, [in the] back of the mind they might think of the computer games[,] so they cannot do their homework efficiently.In this way computer games are [a ]waste of time.
Along with study, computer games ha[ve] an impact on children's health. They continuously seat[sit] in front of [their] computer screen[, which] that affects their eye sights.[eyesight] [Thus, w]e find many children around us with spectacles. Another problem is that[if kids are so busy with their computers,] they won't get involved in physical games such as soccer, basketball and so on. If they go outside and play, then it will be beneficial for them in developing mental and physical health. They have an opportunity m[eet] new people and make new friends[,] which will help them in developing [their] social network also. Therefore[On the other hand,] staying at home and playing computer game has no such advantages.
Lastly, some computer games leav[e a] negative impression on [a ]child's shaping{"growing" seems better here} brain. {or "impression in shaping a child's brain"} Some computer games are based on crimes, violence and robbery. All these might impact children's mind[s ]. So rather than [ n]ourishing their brains, {or "than causing their brains to flourish, "}computer games might lead children to [focus on the ]darkness of the world and stunt their brain[s'] growth. Thus, to avoid [these negative] consequences, children should not [be] allowed to play computer games.
To conclude, I strongly agree that computer games are totally [a ]waste of time, {or "are a total waste of time"} so children should not be allowed to play {I would add "them" here}. There are lots of [alternative] activit[ies] such as outdoor games, indoor games, craft activities and so on[, which will] They will adapt [kids] to new skills. So parents should allow them to flow[participate] in such activities rather then allowing them to p[lay] computer games.
As everyone{two words here} of us loves to live in {"a" or "this"} high tech world, why children should be legging in it? {"legging in it" is wrong - what do you mean?} It's{avoid contractions} true, but as an adult we know the limitations of the use of the technical devices such as cell phones, computers and so on, [while] children are unaware of it. Therefore, in my opinion, I agree that the playing computer games is [a ]waste of time with several explanation[s ] as mentioned below.{I would leave out this last phrase}
To begin with, children's study get[s ]{"is" seems better here} affected by constantly playing games on computers. Children will play it[them] continuously as they love to play it[them].{maybe use a synonym for the second "them", like "love to play these addictive apps} Obviously, computer games attrac[t ] us also; but for kids, they are not mature enough to understand that their time is being wasted. They cannot focus on their study properly and ultimately their grades get affected. Even if they do their home work, [in the] back of the mind they might think of the computer games[,] so they cannot do their homework efficiently.In this way computer games are [a ]waste of time.
Along with study, computer games ha[ve] an impact on children's health. They continuously seat[sit] in front of [their] computer screen[, which] that affects their eye sights.[eyesight] [Thus, w]e find many children around us with spectacles. Another problem is that[if kids are so busy with their computers,] they won't get involved in physical games such as soccer, basketball and so on. If they go outside and play, then it will be beneficial for them in developing mental and physical health. They have an opportunity m[eet] new people and make new friends[,] which will help them in developing [their] social network also. Therefore[On the other hand,] staying at home and playing computer game has no such advantages.
Lastly, some computer games leav[e a] negative impression on [a ]child's shaping{"growing" seems better here} brain. {or "impression in shaping a child's brain"} Some computer games are based on crimes, violence and robbery. All these might impact children's mind[s ]. So rather than [ n]ourishing their brains, {or "than causing their brains to flourish, "}computer games might lead children to [focus on the ]darkness of the world and stunt their brain[s'] growth. Thus, to avoid [these negative] consequences, children should not [be] allowed to play computer games.
To conclude, I strongly agree that computer games are totally [a ]waste of time, {or "are a total waste of time"} so children should not be allowed to play {I would add "them" here}. There are lots of [alternative] activit[ies] such as outdoor games, indoor games, craft activities and so on[, which will] They will adapt [kids] to new skills. So parents should allow them to flow[participate] in such activities rather then allowing them to p[lay] computer games.
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video games will make children’s time spent like water. Children spend excessive amount of time on video games that are on homework or revision. That even leads to their decreasing marks in test and their grades. Bloomberg clocks that addicted children plays video games at an average of 5 hours per day, highlighting their uncontrollable time in playing video games.
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