Question

you recently visited a government hospital in your town in an emergency and you were struck by the total lack of efficiency with which the staff worked; they were extremely rude to the patients too. Also, the lack of hygiene in the ICU shocked you
Write a letter to the general superintendent of the hospital expressing your displeasure at the poor service the hospital provides.

Answer 1

To,
The General Superintendent,
Shyam nagar,
Delhi

Date :- 28/08/17

From,
XYZ(Name of the writer)
Ghanshyam nagar,
Delhi

Sir/ma'am,

Myself , XYZ, writing this letter to you in accordance to aware you about the bad condition of hospitals out here.

Already there's only one hospital here and that too is at the edge of the end of our locality. Provided that it isn't managed at all. Nor they keep proper hygenic condition in the hospital.

There are less beds for the patients. They costs so much for a day. There aren't much machine's available for the check up.There are less doctors too. And also staff members are very rude to their patients.

Please look into the matter at the earliest and try solving this condition as soon as possible. 

Thanking you, 
Your's faithfully 
XYZ 
(Designation)

Answer 2

Formal letter

H.No:18_3_654/3/b/6,

laldarwaza,

Hyderabad_500053.

14th September,2019.

The medical superintendent,

Aditya government hospital,

king koti,

Hyderabad.

sir,

Sub: Poor Sanitary Conditions at Government hospitals in our city.

Sir

I write to your esteemed self to express my deep concern and anguish over the poor state of the government hospital in Jammu. As you already know there is an outbreak of epidemic of dengue and chikanguniya all across the nation. In this situation, my brother was affected by dengue unfortunately. We rushed him to the government hospital in desperation. We did not know the shocking surprises we would meet at the hospital.

The hygiene and the cleanliness at the emergency were horrible. Litter lay scattered in the corridors and the reception appeared to have not been cleaned for many days. As I went to the reception, I found the desk deserted. Seeing the poor state of affairs, the family decided to rush to Dyanand Medical College and Hospital.

If we had not rushed my brother to that hospital, any tragedy could have happened! I felt so outraged the Government operated hospitals afterwards! What a sheer wastage of national resources, the tax money of us, the taxpayers! What is the good of such government hospitals which are as good as nothing? Why does the government not privatize such hospitals?

Now, I on behalf of all the residents of Delhi appeal to the concerned authorities to look into the poor state of the Government hospitals. These hospitals should be either given to private companies or managed properly. I am hopeful that you will give my views enough space in your esteemed daily.

Yours truly,

Thakur Sambhav Singh.