Question

a memorable vacation essay

Answer 1

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Answer 2

it was going to be the best vacation ever.I was going to be in the big city,but I had to overcome one of my biggest fears first.The wait to be called onto the plane was a blur.All I can remember is feeling both agnst and bliss.I was not scared to be in the big city.No,thinking about the bright lights and smog filled my lungs with bliss.The intercom called for our flight atleast,I assumed it did because my mother,brother and his fianc got up and started walking towards the lady standing behind a counter,promptly taking tickets from what I assumed to be other passengers.As the line got shorter the beat of my heart got faster.Every step felt like a panic attack lurking behind the shadows waiting to leap forward straight through my chest cavity only to grab my heart and lungs and rip such vital organs from my body.The rest was obscure.The next thing I remember is the flight attandent going over safety procedures.As I buckled up fear began to subside before I could escape its cold,clammy grips the plane begans to take off.I felt like I was in hyper speed on some space adventure.The plane was going so that the seen behind the window was a blur,much like most of the trip up until this very moment.