Question

are there any mistakes?
Introduction:
Thesis statement
Education means more than just teaching students to read, write, or know how to count numbers, the role of the teachers is further than doing this. They should prepare the students to be , successful learners, workers, citizens and leaders. Electronic devices contribute in facilitating gathering information. It became essential in the daily life and have changed the way of how information is collected, but how can we use this new technology in the curriculum to expand the resource base and knowledge of all students.

Body 1
If the school does not have a clear plan for how and why it wants to apply technology, it will be waste of money. Today almost all classrooms have a computer, but some schools do not use these devices effectively. However, many schools fail to integrate technology in the curriculums. The purpose of technology is not just buying the latest devices, but there must be a plan in how technology can contribute to develop students achievements.

Body 2
Effective teacher can integrate technology in classroom to change classroom dynamics.
Technology influences in how teachers teach and how students receive information. To achieve the best use of technology, schools need a practical plan to integrate technology into all aspects. “There can be infinite uses of the computer and of new age technology, but if teachers themselves are not able to bring it into the classroom and make it work, then it fails.” - Nancy Kassebaum. “Teachers need to integrate technology seamlessly into the curriculum instead of viewing it as an add-on, an afterthought, or an event.” – Heidi-Hayes Jacobs.

Body 3
We are in the 21st century, no limits for technology. This is the stage of radical development where technology controlled everything. Smartphones and laptops consider an effective means for the development and improvement the education system .The 21st generation has wild curiosity in everything, we cannot face that with educational methods that were designed earlier such as blackboard, chalk and book. If we continue use the old methods, we will not be able to deliver our students to the summit and we will deprive them of great opportunities to challenge the obstacles of the 21st century ."Technology can become the “wings” that will allow the educational world to fly farther and faster than ever before—if we will allow it." - Jenny Arledge

Body 4
Good teachers know how to meet the students needs, how to integrate technology to be effective and know how to choose from a wide range of available techniques which can fit his teaching methods and his methodological goals, while engaging students. "Learners in the internet age don’t need more information. They need to know how to efficiently use the massive amount of information available at their fingertips – to determine what’s credible, what’s relevant, and when its useful to reference.” - Anna Sabramowicz

Body 5
Students prefer technology because they think it makes learning more enjoyable. They prefer tablets such as laptops and cellphones to do their work, but they also love using pens, pencils and papers. It important to learn students how and when to use these devices. These devices may hinder or support the learning environment. www.newswire. A group of researchers in psychology research found that the use of electronic devices in class can lead to a dispersed learning environment. They measured the actual duration of student who use laptops in class for non-academic reasons and they have found that those students has became less quarterly performance, as indicated in their final grade. Ravizza et al. (2016)

conclusion
There is no doubt that using technology in classroom is important for innovation and imagination, but the current information explosion makes necessary to know how to use technology in effective way. Teachers must be well informed about the types of information and the technology and whether they are suitable for use in the classroom or not. School boards and teachers must have a clear plan about what they want from their students to achieve through information technology. This will open students' Minds, improve their skills, and allowing them to be better prepared for more technology predecessor.

Answer 1

no in my opinion their is no any mistake

Answer 2

Ya no mistakes in this para