Question

check it and give me all mistakes which I done this is a story which is made by me

Answer 1

in the 1st half there is lot of grammatical error and also 1-3 useless sentences like door was near me and opened it with my hand

Answer 2

To the sound of
I was suffering from fever already.
Slowly i put my hands and legs out of the bed.
I was alone in my house.
My mother and father had gone to attend a wedding event which was taking place in another city near ours.
I slowly went to the door.
I am near the door
I opened the door with my hand.
I screamed loudly when I saw who was standing in front of my door.
I saw that outside the door all the press were getting autograph from me.
I am not able to understand.
I saw girls rushing to me and I am giving my autograph to them.
I asked a girl why they were getting my autograph and why were the press and media here.
She answered that it was because of my hidden talent and encouraged me telling that i was a graet artist.
I again asked in which field.
Dhe looked at me with a softened smile and answered that it was the sketches that i sent to New York.
I screamed with happiness in my face.
The press and media had come to take my interview.
By then my parents had come and were wondering what was happening by seeing the press.
They were proud of me.
Because my parents encouraged my hidden talent the nation has got a great artist.
I will do my best for the nation and make my parents the proudest people in the world.