Question

correct error in this
A gym was hosting a competition for(a).......
see what swimmer could hold his(b)......
breath longer underwater. One after ( c) ,........
other, the swimmers jumped into the (d).......
pool. When they can't resurface, a(e).....
child watched from a sideline made(f).....
the note in his science journal,(g)......
"Human beings are soluble into water"
(h)..​

Answer 1

Error Correction

Explanation:

• a) A gym was hosting a competition to
• In this sentence, to will be used instead of for as to implies a sense of reasoning and the cause for which an event is being held or done.

• b) see which swimmer could hold his
• In this sentence, which is to be used instead of what as here animate objects are being referred to and swimmers are living beings.
• d) the other, the swimmers jumped into the
• The was missing here, and has been added to indicate a sense of definiteness.
• e) pool. When they couldn't resurface, a
• Couldn't will be used here instead of can't as the sentence is being reported in the past tense and not the present.
• f) child watching from a sideline, made
• Watching is used here to show a continuity of action and to denote that the action hasn't stopped or finished. The child was watching when he made a note so watching is to be used here.
• g) a note in his science journal
• A will be used here as it was just a general note and not something particular.
• h) "Human beings are soluble in water"
• In is the correct preposition instead of into as in always follows the verb soluble.

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