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children love picnics and outings with their parents
1.though they are equally happier doing these things with
2.them around the house.A parent may make
3.his child feels special by following some simple
4.rituals, bedtime stories, the game of cards or
5.simply talking and laugh together before going to
6.bed.This give children a wonderful sense
7.of well beung.They hardly ever forgot these moments
8.and cherish them throughout these lives.
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happier - happy
may - often
feels - feel
the - a
laugh - laughing
give - gives
forgot - forget
these - their
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The sentences can be edited as follows-
1. though they are equally happy doing these things with
2. them in the house. A parent may make
3. his children feel special by following some simple
4. rituals, bedtime stories, a game of cards or
5. simply talking and laughing together before going to
6. bed. This gives children a wonderful sense
7. of well-being. They hardly ever forget these moments
8. and cherish them throughout their lives.
- The word happier could be used if a comparison was being made in the first sentence.
- A game of cards was talked about for the first time, so 'the' can't be used.
- 'Simply talking and laughing' is an example of present continuous tense.
- The paragraph is written in the present tense with a general tone, so 'forget' is correct.
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