Question

Write an essay about your winter holiday. It could be about a specific event too. Write about 400 words.

Answer 1

Everybody loves holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun.I strongly believe that all students and teaching staff are looking for winter holiday because it is a break for we all. We can have more free time to do what we want during this period of time. We can sleep and stay up as long as we want to and don’t need to worry about getting up late for class the next day morning

.I had always dreamed about going to France and last winter holiday my dream came true.

It was the evening of December 19, when my parents told me that we are going to France for one week in our holiday. I couldn’t believe my ears what I just heard. I asked they again if is not making it up, but they said they already purchased tickets online and made plans. On 21th May we departed Berlin and headed towards our first destination, Mont Blanc mounten. As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures. I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes. We stayed in the 5-star hotel near the moutain. Next day we hired a helicopter for a trip to see the sorrounds. It was simply amazing.Last day was fantastic too because I’ve drived a snowmobile and it was really fun.

My holiday was exciting and full of joy. I enjoyed it immensely. I am looking forward to going there again soon.


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Answer 2

I am planning to visit my cousins during these winter vacations. We have been planning this ever since they visited us during the summer break. We have a lot of plans for the few days I will be visiting them and are quite excited about the same. I am lucky to have like-minded cousins. Being with them is the best feeling in the world. I just can’t wait to spend time with them and indulge in various mischievous activities during this vacation.
Family Time
I also want to spend time with my family. I am so tied up with my school assignments, coaching classes and other activities during the usual school days that I am hardly able to spend any time with my family. It has been long that I sat with my grandparents and listened to their interesting stories. I want to spend a lot of time with them during the vacations. I also want to play with the baby sister who always yearns to spend time with me. Besides, I will help my mother with the household chores as much as I can.

 
Learn a New Art
Apart from visiting my cousins and spending time with my family, I also plan to learn a new art during my winter vacations. Glass painting has always fascinated me and I wish to learn this art during this time. I have already selected few tutorials online. I will refer to them to learn this new art.
One of my neighbourhood aunts is also skilled in glass painting. She has done glass painting on her windows and has also hung numerous glass painting pieces in her house. In fact, her beautiful pieces of glass paintings have inspired me to learn this art. Besides, watching tutorials, I plan to visit her few times to acquire this skill. I have already brought the colours, brushes and frames and just can’t wait to begin these sessions.
Conclusion
I am just waiting for my mid-term exams to get over so that I can enjoy my winter vacations. However, I will not only indulge in all the fun activities during my vacations but also study for my final exams.
I am planning to visit my cousins during these winter vacations. We have been planning this ever since they visited us during the summer break. We have a lot of plans for the few days I will be visiting them and are quite excited about the same. I am lucky to have like-minded cousins. Being with them is the best feeling in the world. I just can’t wait to spend time with them and indulge in various mischievous activities during this vacation.

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