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You've been stuck in a haunted house,with a friend.
Make a story,of 100 words.
Remember to add a few twists and a cliff-hanger! ^^
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unknown39a: ANNOUNCEMENT
unknown39a: check out zodiax's question there is this horror story there which is very awesome
Anonymous: But, (for a person who's writing a story with a specific genre for the first time), it's actually good to be positive and compliment them, cuz that's the thing which will make them have confidence and you know, they'll try to write more stories. Of course, after a specific point in time, there'd more people to judge it and give it critical reviews. ^^
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deep1032kir: I partly agree with Neer but for someone like me I love to get comments to correct
deep1032kir: They render a great help in improving my writtings
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Answers

Answered by GalaxyBoy15
15

I dont know why and how I got into this unknown haunted house with my fake friend, Frog. But as I am struck here, I need to find a way out.

"Here!", Frog shouted. I rushed to him at the hallways, he seemed to be tensed looking at something what I would call a dark figure, floating infront of us. I wasn't sure if it was a he or a she. though this uncertainty, I asked him to point the touch at its face.

It was something, I would never ever like to see, even in my dreams. That look, like a face without a mouth, nose and eyes, horrified me to run out from that spot. And as Frog is fat, he couldn't catch up to me. I enter into a unknown bedroom which seemed to me a secure place to hide. I was about to lock the door when I saw Frog screaming and running towards me with that ghostly figure chasing him. without any hesitation, I choose myself to be safe, and locked the door with him being outside. I could hear his screams for the next few moments before it went all silent.

In that room, I saw some pictures hanging on the wall, which I guess was of the owner and his family. They had 3 children. While looking for more info, I found some more documents which were dated around 18 century. I was completely blanked out when I saw some documents which claimed that the mother was responsible for several deaths and even witchcrafts. I kinda knew at that point, with whom I was messing. I opened a drawer and found a knife.

With that in my hand along with the touch which I snatched from frog, before leaving him outside to die. I had. 3 options, Run, Hide or get Killed.

To Be Continued!

Dont look at the corners of your room!

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Anonymous: XDD oh shoot
GalaxyBoy15: now I am brainstorming for a climactic ending for the final part if this story.
GalaxyBoy15: of*
Anonymous: Waiting for it!
1Angel25: Amazing answer✌✌ ^_^
GalaxyBoy15: Appreciated. ✌ ^_^
1Angel25: okk...☺
Anonymous: Wut. O. o someone DELETED THAT STORY QUESTION!!! =_=DAM. N THOSE MODS
GalaxyBoy15: which one?
Anonymous: that were-wolf story -___- i feel like stabbing em
Answered by deep1032kir
15

^^

"So ...The time has come", I said after taking a long breath. "Its show time ",My friend interrupted breaking the feeling of tensed situation.I glared at him and signed him to keep his mouth shut.We were about to explore the  mysteries of that house which was abandoned yrs ago.It was our vacations time so we were just free to explore and I being a fan of paranormal stuff I choose to do it.

Now in no time we were inside that building moreover it looked like a maze.

"So Do u know the old boring History of this house ?",My friend asked."I was never interested in History and Civics ...but this house looks interesting ",I mumbled .Suddenly , Clank sound started coming ,It seemed like something was hitting the glass. We checked the window panes but they were normal...

So we decided to follow the source and it was coming from a room which looked like attic. I didn't think it was a gr8 idea but my crazy self along with my friend still went. We both were horrified just to come close to the truth that .....The sound was coming from the mirror. on which  a cloth was kept.I along with my friend ran towards the exit but dam.n we were lost in that scary maze like building.

"All right so now what " with this look I and my friend both looked at each other. Our bad times just started but without spending much time We both decided to stick together and find the way out when we entered a room full of dolls big small of all sizes but with same creepy smile.

And the worst That I could imagine all of them started coming towards us slowly and steady closer and closer. My heart raced and a chill ran down my spines but it was not over yet MY FRIEND WAS MISSING .

........That's all For now I suppose...............


unknown39a: wut?
unknown39a: the heck is this? fight club?
unknown39a: 2 guys enter 1 guy leaves
unknown39a: now I'll say alright the part where you woke up and looked around was good but the ending not so much.
deep1032kir: ..?
unknown39a: that letter sounded a little too... um how do i put it., let's just say odd
deep1032kir: Yup I know that
unknown39a: well except for the ending it's all good so it's a crisp 7/10
deep1032kir: Thanks a lot :)
Anonymous: O. o creepy. 7.5/10
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