Read the paragraph that Lukas is planning to include in his narrative essay. Running is my life. Beginning last summer I practiced every day from the early break of dawn until the heat of the midday sun forced me to take a break. Sipping from my bottle of icy water to keep myself hydrated, I dreamed about running a mile in under ten minutes to compete in the statewide race. What should Lukas do with this paragraph?
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Lukas should put the content at the beginning of the essay.
The paragraph just started with the correct information about the running athlete, so it should be added in the first paragraph for the better understanding.
If he adds the above passage in the center paragraph, the reader will not understand why they appear, and the message in the essay will not reach the reader in an effective way.
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